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02 April 2010 @ 12:23 pm
[Fanfiction] - Shuuhei Hisagi/Izuru Kira - Blue Skies  
I'm drabbling again...

Title: Blue Skies
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: T
Pairing: Shuuhei Hisagi/Izuru Kira
Wordcount: 234
Warnings: Vaguely implied spoilers for the SS arc.
Disclaimer: Oh, if they were only mine...
Notes: Written for the queersouls100 prompt 001 'Blue'

Summary: The road to hell...

Shuuhei is aware that he is being used. He’s no fool, and he can feel it in the way Kira clings to him, taste it in the emptiness of their kisses. They lie in a welter of discarded clothes, tangled together in a mess of need and lust and desperation.

Kira looks at him with desolate eyes as blue as the skies in summer.

Kira bites Shuuhei's bottom lip hard and he tightens his grip in his friend’s blonde hair. Kira’s long legs are around his waist, Kira’s naked body sliding against his.

‘Please,’ Kira whispers.

So Shuuhei takes him hard, takes him roughly, pushes his over the edge with pain. He takes him as he does every time, and just like every other time he promises himself that the next night it will be different. Promises himself that soon, soon, he will be able to show Kira that it doesn’t have to hurt to feel good. That pleasure does not always come with penance.
He makes that promise every night, and every night he knows that next time Kira will look at him and beg, sweeping away all his best intentions.

The road to hell is paved with good intentions.

No, he thinks, as Kira bites his shoulder hard enough to bruise. No. This road to hell is paved with silver, and lined with row after row of dying marigolds, the gold all bleeding to blue.

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gypsygrrl420gypsygrrl420 on April 2nd, 2010 11:36 am (UTC)
My god! This was perfect. Short, bittersweet, and an utter treat to read right before class. Seriously, you conveyed so much in such a lovely little handful of words...*g* I look forward to reading more of your work.
ms_legerdemain: integrams_legerdemain on April 3rd, 2010 12:24 am (UTC)
Thankyou! ♥ *blushes at the compliments* I'm glad you liked it, I always find drabbles a challenge.

Tehe, there'll probably be quite a bit coming - I'm on mid-semester break and I'm procrastinating something chronic. :p
gypsygrrl420gypsygrrl420 on April 3rd, 2010 01:15 am (UTC)
My one-sentences tend to run over 300 words...so a drabble? Yeah--impossible for me, lol. (Something about needing to tell an entire story in one sentence. *shrugs* Blame it on the Creative Writer in me, I suppose.)

Oooh...nice. Mine was two weeks ago. *sighs* Four more weeks left...
ms_legerdemain: dollsms_legerdemain on April 4th, 2010 02:42 am (UTC)
Oh, I feel that. I have this problem with excessive use of commas. Sentences just turn into paragraphs without me noticing. I'm better than I was, but it's still a problem.

Yeah, it's good to have a holiday. Unfortunately, holiday is here synonymous with doing-all-the-work-I-didn't-do-during-the-term-because-I'm-lazy. :p But why would I do uni work/think about RL when I could write fic?

Also...that dp...is very, very dsitracting.
Nnoi: Bleach - Kira Raise your headnnoi on April 2nd, 2010 02:37 pm (UTC)
Wow beautiful
ms_legerdemain: lightningms_legerdemain on April 3rd, 2010 12:24 am (UTC)
Thankyou! Glad you think so. :)
Jazz: Bleach: Ulquiorrakitchensink13 on April 3rd, 2010 02:27 am (UTC)
I really love this. The atmosphere is excellent.
ms_legerdemain: cloudms_legerdemain on April 4th, 2010 02:43 am (UTC)
Thanyou! I'm glad you liked it. :)
xglimpsex: BLEACH: Gin!Killxglimpsex on May 13th, 2010 02:16 pm (UTC)

It's no secret that this pairing is really... really not my favorite, but this is so wonderfully written. Short, but it packs a punch, especially in that last sentence. Shit. My heart just ached for a momoent.
ms_legerdemain: Ladyms_legerdemain on May 16th, 2010 09:05 am (UTC)
*blushes* Thankyou. ♥

I have a weird relationship with this pairing; I don't actually really ship them together, because I see their potential relationship as so destructive, but at the same time I find myself writing them. Perhaps because they're so destructive. So I don't really like them together, but I put them together because I find it interesting. And because I'm a sadist who enjoys character torture.

Still, I'm glad it had an impact, even if you don't like the pairing.
convex, concave.jazz_trousers on November 3rd, 2010 12:47 am (UTC)
Fuck me sideways, this paring's such a guilty pleasure of mine.
Brilliantly written, love how you paint the picture and portray Shuhei's intentions.